PLEASEE UPDATE! TOO BAD i was i kinda waiting for that scene :P (i think i need some flushing in my head) anyway i like it :D this is going to be in my fav list

You. This. Favs. Go. Good. -just woke up. Not the most intelligent being in the world.

woah...imma take a wild guess and say that Flonne is pregnant :D...do u have the next story up yet?

For intrest sake judging from your pattern,Laharl's mother's name is Gwen, but I'm sure you know that already...

cool story

your using too much overlord

it's getting a little annoying

i didnt like the part when you make the character of laharl . i mean a least make it realistic because flonne is not that scare of him. he a little to other it not that evil.

Thank you for completing the story! It's wonderful! I'm so excited for the Sequel! Wonderful writing! THANK YOU! I love your work!

Wah! D No it's not Flonne beileve
The relationship is not a lie! ...hopefully

But on a hapier note!
she's pregnant 3

hahaha

UPDATE! Awesome chapter! Loving the story _ I was wondering if you had stopped writing... It's a little sad about Laharl and Flonne though. Please update soon!

Bravo! An excellent story and nice foreshadowing with Buku. Can't wait for the sequel.

I had a lot of fun reading this.

I really hope you continue soon! It's too good to stop there

Wow, talk about a climax. Thank goodness Flonne turned out okay...

I noticed a few spelling and punctuation errors here and there, but nothing really awful that warrants an earful. Good job :)

Please continue the story..it is so good please do not give up! Thank you!

MORE MORE MORE! It's SO GOOD OH MY GOSH! PLEASE I LOVE your writing! LOVE IT LOVE IT! You have me hooked FOREVER!