I just have to say that it is a shame that you haven't updated this in forever because I'd dearly love to know what comes next!

OMFGAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWD! Don't leave it there! Continue, heavy on the fluff, and soon! XD
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I hope you can update some time soon!

Please update! I really want to continue reading! And I love your story it is amazing, the characters are perfect, and this last chapter was awesome!

Sorry if this doesn't make to much sense but I'm writing as I read:

Darn you Tobe, they almost admitted how they felt towards each other.

Ohh, Neal's very protective isn't he.

Yay! they finally got together.

Noo, what's going on? Why is Dom leaving?

Looking forward to finding out why, Shadow.

please update! This is such a good story and now i am craving kel/dom fluff!

Very good. Update as often as you can, so that you don't get attacked by a mob of people demanding more chapters for this story.

ur story is so good! plz plz plz plz plz keep updating!

AMAZING.

This chapter has been the highlight of my day. If you're like me, that Tamora Pierce has been your bread and butter for the past decade, then this is a total masterpiece. I can only wait for the next!

This is perfect so far. PERFECT!

i can't believe you left it on a cliff-hanger i hate you no... i actually love you this is exactly how i imagined them getting together please hurry and up-date

amazing, amazing, AMAZING! Please update soon. I love the long chapters, they are spectacularly easy to get lost in! Please don't torture us with the evil cliffie and update soon!

Hey,

Great story! I love what you have done with the characters. They are really true to form. Please keep at it!

i can't believe the cliff-hanger! Gutted! Great chapter, i'm really pleased they finally got together, though i hope whatever happens next isn't too traumatic! plaese update soon.

soph.

EVIL! UGH, you little... How cruel! To rip him away so soon after they have finally... :P If he dies, you die with him. (Not really, but I won't be happy -.-)

Hmm. I wonder what Tobe will say to the look on Kel's face if she returns to sleep. Or maybe she won't be able to, and will find something else to do? :p

Hope they return soon... -pouts- In the meantime, I'm sure SOMEBODY will learn about Kel and Dom's little revelation the previous night... Not Neal, I hope? If he's the first to learn of both Dom's feelings AND their kisses, it'd be just annoying. Hm... :) Well, whatever works, huh?

Update soon.

OH MY GOD! that's perfect, it sounds exactly right! especially the part with daine and numair, he's sposed to be that protective, it's sweet but if i were daine (i wish) i bet it would annoying. thank you fro the long chapter it was wonderful, keep it going is all i have to say, and that you did a brilliant job.