| Reviews for A Fine Line |
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fade chapter 1 . 1/28/2013 Omg I absolutely loved this it just fit the song so perfectly |
SinsofMidnight chapter 1 . 1/22/2010 Well-written. Made me wanna cry. Always loved that song... It totally fits them. |
gomii chapter 1 . 6/17/2009 Eep, the ending was so sad D': Loved it but I wish the ending could've been even more sadder, then I would have cried instead of almost crying like I almost did :) Anywho, really good work 8D |
NaruSasu666 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009 This song does fit them perfectly...I listened to it as well while reading it. You kept them fairly in charater, not a lot of fanfics do that, I find. Keep up the good work! |
DigitalSaiyan chapter 1 . 6/5/2009 wow this was amazing! and such a coincidence too! I was just listening to this song today and was thinking it would make a perfect deathnote amv or fanfic, and thought it was strange i had never come across one. you did an excellent job of writing it! perfectly in character and really hot (the sex scenes XD) |
ReiMori chapter 1 . 6/4/2009 holy hell, i cried so much at the end even though I knew it was coming. I don't particulary like the L as seme thing, but this was an exception, cuz I LOVED this fanfic! I like how you separated the lyrics to fit the paragraph, total props. "I Hate Everything About You" is one of my all-time fav songs and 3 days grace is my all-time fav band, so when I read this fanfic along with listening to the song, it felt way more sentimental. Whoo Hoo! Keep on writing awesome fics, they help the world stay balanced! ;-) |
w00tsit chapter 1 . 5/24/2009 I remember you mentionig this D Very well planned and executed. Only criticism is that you could hve gone into slightly more detail, but that's me being picky :) I enjoyed this so much :D Saffi x |
BlueOctoberSky chapter 1 . 5/23/2009 I've always thought this song was a perfect fit for this pairing. |