Reviews for A Fine Line
fade chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Omg I absolutely loved this it just fit the song so perfectly
SinsofMidnight chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Well-written. Made me wanna cry.

Always loved that song... It totally fits them.
gomii chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Eep, the ending was so sad D':

Loved it but I wish the ending could've been even more sadder, then I would have cried instead of almost crying like I almost did :)

Anywho, really good work 8D
NaruSasu666 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
This song does fit them perfectly...I listened to it as well while reading it. You kept them fairly in charater, not a lot of fanfics do that, I find. Keep up the good work!
DigitalSaiyan chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
wow this was amazing! and such a coincidence too! I was just listening to this song today and was thinking it would make a perfect deathnote amv or fanfic, and thought it was strange i had never come across one. you did an excellent job of writing it! perfectly in character and really hot (the sex scenes XD)
ReiMori chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
holy hell, i cried so much at the end even though I knew it was coming.

I don't particulary like the L as seme thing, but this was an exception, cuz I LOVED this fanfic!

I like how you separated the lyrics to fit the paragraph, total props.

"I Hate Everything About You" is one of my all-time fav songs and 3 days grace is my all-time fav band, so when I read this fanfic along with listening to the song, it felt way more sentimental.

Whoo Hoo! Keep on writing awesome fics, they help the world stay balanced! ;-)
w00tsit chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
I remember you mentionig this D

Very well planned and executed. Only criticism is that you could hve gone into slightly more detail, but that's me being picky :)

I enjoyed this so much :D

Saffi

x
BlueOctoberSky chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I've always thought this song was a perfect fit for this pairing.