This was brilliant! I loved it. :)

"Ianto wonders how much further down it will still go before he's quite finished falling in love with Jack"...what an absolutely fabulous line.

This piece of writing was just perfect.

Utterly in character. Totally believable.

I loved,loved,loved it!

xx

p.s. Hitchhikers references will do it for me,everytime!

Love the Hitchhikers' reference :) I'm in a very domestic Janto mood today, and this is great. The tie thing (Ianto hating/insisting on wearing it after a crisis) is really cute, especially the Jack knows why he does it. And Jack picking it out, aww.

I adored this! It was very well written, and the poem is one of my favorites. Very, very well done!

I loved it! The thing about the ties makes some sense (I could actually see Jack give Ianto a tie...). :)

I absolutely loved the hitchhiker line... I never could get the hang of thursdays either. tomorrow is towel day!

Never could get the hang of Thursdays

World endings, houses being pulled down, bypasses built…

i love the lines taken out of Hitchhiker's Guide!