wow this is really good

you misspelled acepted. B(

No flames. I thought this was a well written and enjoyable story.

Quite good, but there are lots of typos. I liked the first half of the story best.

This story is very good. Except for a couple of minor errors and typos it is great.

Best Mewtwo fanfic on the site that I've read so far.

The one real problem is with the antagonist, that being Meowth. There is no way Meowth would last two seconds against Mewtwo, even if it were a double battle. I also don't imagine that Meowth would plan to capture Mewtwo in the first place, as when Meowth was in Mewtwo's captivity in "Mewtwo Returns", his loyalty was not to his boss, but rather to catching Pikachu. I will admit that he was pretty darn badass, and that I found his maverick personality in this fic to be VERY ATTRACTIVE (I admit to having a huge crush on Meowth). . .but he's still out of character nevertheless.

Other than that, it was exceptionally well written, other than minor mistakes. If it weren't for Meowth being so OOC (Mewtwo is my third favorite fictional character of all time; Meowth is my first), I'd favorite it.

Actually, I think I'll favorite it anyways. It wouldn't be the first time I favorited a fic in which one of my favorite characters was OOC.

cool

It's an interesting plot and theme, and it's good to see characters willing to treat the pokémon more as living things, characters willing to admit mistakes, and a compromise between having a Legendary as a glorified pet or set on a scale so far from normal pokémon as to be abstract. You've got a good framework. It could benefit from some editing on the decoration.

Much of it is just spelling and formatting; you've got a number of places where letters or punctuation were dropped, where é accidentally ended up a e, where "it's" (meaning "it is") was used where you need "its" (meaning its possession), or where capitalization came up when not really fitting. Caps lock is not, despite rumors to the contrary, cruise control for cool. If you want a more complete breakdown, PM me and I can send you a revised copy.

The pacing is workable, but not perfect. The story gets to the point. The problem is that the point is a like a fencing foil's tip; there's very little bite or weight behind it. The underlying framework is actually meaningful, but readers don't get the necessary detail or hesitation between actions and decisions to make it seem as if things were meaningful for the characters. Sentence structure and pacing feels a bit too similar, too. There are points like the "And was caught mid-leap by Mewtwo" that'd make excellent 'bite' for the action scenes, but since every other paragraph is short whether or not is has bite, it doesn't really get as much attention or even feel like as sudden as it should.

Great read, though.

very good, a few grammar and spelling errors, but not enough to worry yourself about it. For not being a big pokemon fan though, this was extrememly well done, cept it's psycho cut, not psychic cut.