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omg.. I can 100% imagine this is how they are

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Beautiful

I like your series of drabbles. Good work!

"When I was young, I briefly thought a jungle gym would be entertaining."

"Was it fun?"

"It was not."

I love this! So true to character.. x

I love scar stories. As someone with a multitude of scars myself, I find them to be really entertaining. I think scars make a person seem interesting. It makes them seem as though they've done something worthwhile in their lives.

Once again, you do not fail to provide wonderful fanfiction. It seems like a very loving moment between the two of them with just an intriqued question. Then it turns into something childishly adorable by the image of himm on a jungle gym. But then, with just a tiny description of him shifting slightly, I get an impression of a much deeper level of Spock.

I don't know... I feel like this leaves a lot left to be explored by the readers. I like how you left the ending almost ambiguous. That almost mysterious feeling is really envoking. Good job!

Psh, they can be scary. I did a few things to myself, stick with swings. But sweet, and very Spock like "no...no it was not fun"

Loved it! Please keep it going! :D

I absolutely love drabbles, yours are awesome. This one made me want to cry, I also liked the second one a lot. It was a nice perspective of him. I'd love more!

Does your story go backwards in time, that's what it seems like. Somewhat like the movie Memento, where it starts from the end then movies backwards, progresses in a present timeline, then goes towards the future, which is the ending. the story, but it's ninty-eight point five percent plausible that I would if it includes Spock and Uhura!

-kendra 3

That was surely not as rated M as others and I thank you for it. It was graphic enough to hint what they were experiencing, but that wasn't the focal point! The focus was that he had loved her, that the way he felt about her, during such an intimate moment, is proof of such a statement

-kendra 3

I wonder if Spock Prime ever felt the love for someone else that this timeline Spock feels. I how you focus on just his thoughts and bring no other to the situation, like Jim Kirk's statement about how he ended up getting the first name.

-kendra 3

So she had a child before the mission, interesting! Anyways, poor Spock! And Poor Kick, he gotten the crap beaten out of him like at least 4 times in the movie, and that was his first mission!

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

-kendra 3