Reviews for Help
Guest chapter 3 . 8/13/2016
Really, smut? Nooooo...beauty. Friendship, love, adoration, respect. The kind of feelings and sex shared between two people that care deeply for each other. Nothing is off limits and it's beautiful, not smutty, when there's respect and love.
jo-zabby chapter 3 . 4/22/2016
Oh my goodness this was so incredible and the ending was amazing! Gah! You're amazing!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/31/2014
You are the BEST smut writer EVER!
Love these two together!
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eye-to-eye-heart-to-heart chapter 3 . 6/17/2014
Well even though that's about sex and fluff and that stuff the thing with the fruit basket brought tears to my eyes. How could u lol
WELL DONE
Blue Wolf2 chapter 3 . 4/17/2014
I loved this story! I wish there were a few more chapters, but what you gave us was amazing. The beginning of Tony and Ziva laying down in Abby's lab makes it seem like they're married. It's just so natural and comforting.
Pamela chapter 3 . 3/7/2014
TIVA smutness! \* o */
Awesome smut by the way 3
kw chapter 3 . 6/18/2013
You write the best tiva smut.
Com2meZT chapter 3 . 2/20/2013
Stay just like this I read with my mouth open feeling like I need a smoke.
Bright Flight chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY AND I REALLY WANT YOU TO CONTINUE!
EnglishChocolate chapter 3 . 10/25/2011
Yes but smut is so very good, more smut i say. Bring on the smut...though i feel i must point out as i can't seem to ignore it...the sausage egg Mcmuffin (yes i know something so small and innocent and yummy...so what can't i ignore about it you ask) well Ziva ate it and it has pork in it and she is devoitly jewish so wouldn't eat it...or at least she'd pick the sausage out or he would. I'm just saying i noticed it. I do hope this isn't the end to the story though. It feels like theres more in it to come.
USAFChief chapter 3 . 9/10/2011
You can just keep writing the smut and I'll keep on reading it...I like your "other" stuff too, though, so don't give that up either. ;)

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HelloPeoplepersons chapter 3 . 6/9/2011
AWESOME SMUT!
starryjules chapter 3 . 4/26/2011
Hi, this is the pile of ashes that used to be Jules...I think she liked your story though!

Holy hotness! For a story with no actual sex in it, that was DAMN sexy! It's also funny and witty and sweet too... so please know that along with your awesome smut-author reputation also comes a well deserved just-dang-good-writer reputation as well. Fantastic!
sammysoso chapter 3 . 1/19/2011
Wow, that was hot. But please please don't leave it there! I think they need to consumation here.
Tiva Swift chapter 3 . 12/31/2010
MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE MORE :D :D :D :D
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