You have to make this a story. Its just too good of a plot

I really liked you add a chapter!? PLEASE!?

So having read this for the...perhaps third time, what I'd like to know is, you, the writer, as you wrote this, did you imagine if even Sebastian himself knew whetgher he was being serious or not?

My thought as I read it was somewhere between that and Ciel's thought. I took it as a particularly cruel way to remind Ciel he is already promised to and in a relationship far more intimate than any marriage could ever be, and as Sebastian rightly pointed out, marriage is supposed to be a symbol of an intimate relationship that already exists, and he hardly has that with Lizzy, but he does have it with someone else.

Well-crafted story. I should've told you far earlier than this.

This was very beautifully written. Good job and keep writing!

Totally had a WTF moment when Sebastian proposed. Oh dear. I'll admit that though I thought your portrayal of the characters was good, something seemed, off. I cannot quite put my finger on it, perhaps the circumstances were a tad forced?
Overall, it was a fun little read.
Thank you for writing it.
Ja ne!

Ah~ kawaii! Why don't you just accept him ciel? x3

R&R if you will - s/4608424/1/Koibito

This is WAYYY too sad ;; But I loved it.

So...they don't get married? That's sad. They're an amazing couple...

This was great!

Nice work :D

So does that mean that Ceil wears the ring on a chain under his cloths? AND he dosent tell Sebastian... Oww soooo sweet, it's just like him!

A proposal was definitely the last thing I saw coming. Wonderfully in character...

And if I could have laughed any harder I would have.

Wow...just wow. If that ever did happen in the series that would be exactly how it would happen! The characters were really IC! I really loved this! I kept expecting Sebastian to suddenly smile and say, "Just kidding!" But he didn't! OMG! I would be so confused if I were Ciel! Though I feel sorry for Sebastian. For once in his life he tries to be serious and Ciel doesn't even believe him! (sigh) I wish there would be a sequel to this. Maybe fast forward to the time when Ciel's marrying Lizzie and Sebas-chan is all sad because Ciel rejected his proposal and...yeah, just a sequel. OOOH! Maybe he could ruin the wedding! Say "I OBJECT!" and run off with a screaming Ciel to make love to him all night! YES! That's it!

Oh god, there I go with my imagination again. Anyway, thank you so much for this inspiring piece!

Beans

Lol as much as I loved this story, I think I enjoyed your conversation with your mom more XD

x'D

This is adorable.

And it was so in character!

CliffhangersLove.

Now I'm tempted to ask a friend of mine to draw me a picture of Sebastian in a dress.

;D

I love it so much! I must go write more SebaCiel myself now. You made them so in-character, and Your grammer and spelling were really good. I loved it!