I don't know what it is with this story, but I love it. It's not so much characterization because Emma didn't get that much but you went and gave her this unique voice. And it is defiant when common sense says keep your head down and shut up unless spoken to (which she did but still).
Victor was definitely Victor though. I loved him, obvious, restrained threat. The way you write him is perfect. Your narration is lovely and unique(to me). I love that he is intrigued or at least interested in her, even for only moments at a time. And I love that she got the last word.

Amen.

Now THAT is writing. That's the single smoothest, most flawless piece I've read so far in this fandom.

I know I'm a few years tardy to this but, this is one of those rare stories that is the yardstick for others to measure themselves by.

Very enjoyable - I especially like the style you choose to create this story with. A "two-thumbs up" from me, my friend!

~xXLadyKitanaXx

Wow. I just found your story and I am astonished. Your choices of words are so terrifying penetrative and leave the reader to expect almost everything or nothing at all between the two to happen.

Very good job!

- Sera

That was awesome! I was actually looking for wade/Emma when I stumbled across this and thought I'd give it a try. So very very good! Love this idea! Love how that characters stayed true and absolutely loved the style of writing! Would be very happy to see you write more of the X-Men universe

You wrote your characters so well that it was sad when it came to an end. Thank you.

I'm confused by the mention of Scott Summers at the end only because I was picturing just two people-two mutants-no Summers involved. I didn't tell myself the room was empty, but all I saw was Emma and Victor. Having Summers brought up again, and in that way, I didn't see it coming.

I really like the description of Emma's Diamond skin, even if the Marilyn bit both amused me and threw me off course for a moment.

nice

Huh. I had never, EVER considered this pairing before. Emma/Wade, maybe. Emma/Sabretooth? It's... intriguing.

Would you consider expanding upon the premise?

I like that there was a hint between them, but it didn't go farther than that (because that would seem ooc)

Whoa. Your writing style is amazing. Its so captivating. Its amazing. Great Job.

This is gorgeous, and makes a great deal of sense. I can see Victor taking a vague interest in the sister of his brother's wife, if only because she's his leverage on Kayla, and therefore Jimmy. There's a creepy, almost mentor-like vibe in the last sentence, which just clicks with how screwed up Victor is when it comes to family. I particlarly love how she shows him her diamond form, and you get to see how she views herself.