Looking forward to reading on and hoping what i want to of happened will of. I hope the incision to deliver Nathen leaves a scar that crosses perfectly through the word PIG.

NO! This is ridiculous. The risk in taking Bella and Peanut...there miracle! If they lost the baby which could happen through stress or tripping let alone Edward's clearly dangerous sperm donor, they may never get this chance again. Why can't he wait and have Emmett come. Edward Senior wouldn't recognise Emmett... or even Jasper. Jasper is his best friend...doesn't have a baby on the way and is even more linked to Edward seeing as his soulmate is Alice. Or better still take Emmett and Alice...and Emmett could call officer mccarthy, i bet he'd help...and Jake. they'd be unstoppable. Arrrrrrrh why can't he be patient. Tooooooo risky nonononononononononoooooooooooooooooooo (I think i'm too invested in this story, I'm getting far too stressed. oh and by the way your writing is loads better in this then in branded, you've clearly improved. very impressive.)

Victoria is awesome

This story was so amazing . I really can’t wait for more. You are a fantastic writer.

Lore
( from Peru)

are you going to finish this story or make a sequel ?

Think I enjoyed the sequel even more than the original. Good storyline, liked your solution to Ed Sr. A good read. Will definitely check out your other stuff in the future.

And the answer is yes.

Could it be?

This is a wonderful story. Keep writting

Goodness me, poor Edward must be grey with all the drama!

I love how close they all are!

What a lovely ending, the family all coming together to celebrate the performance was just right. Thanks for sharing a great story, it's been a bumpy ride but I've loved it!

Even though I knew Ed Sr was still a problem in the background you still managed to completely surprise me!

Poor Edward must have been terrified, it's so hard to watch a loved one in such a precarious situation.

I had a feeling it was going to be a dramatic birth experience!