Reviews for Sufferings
Nicoismine chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
YOU FORGOT NICO!
Jumpingdears chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
This was...

WONDERFUL!

but one thing bothered me: Sally was not Poseidon's wife, (his wife is someone I can't remember at the moment though, mother of Triton) Sally was his lover~

Anyways it was quite sad yet lovely to read
Dancer4756 chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
I loved it! Great writing. The only problem was... Nico is missing! :-O
Hannah.Janine chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
I have no idea how much I 'awwed' out loud while reading this! *starts crying* It was so beautiful! *random kid walks up and hands me a tissue* Thank you. *blows nose* You are an exacallent writer

- Hannah
sticksandstones713 chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
You stayed true to the characters and made it perfect it was really great be proud of yourself!
Just Slightly Obsessed chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
I loved it! Really inappropriately started giggling at 'I am Charles Vulcan Beckendorf, and I am dead.' Yeah...

Really liked Clarisse's ending, and Thalia's, and Luke's.
Clara Fonteyn chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
I can't remember if I already added to favorites, so... yeah!
The-All-Mighty chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Loved it. Very good.
Thalia Castellan chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
I don't think it was a waste of time, or if it was it was the best time waster anyones ever come up with. Anyway, as you can tell I enjoyed this and all of them were really well done. I like Thalia's the best (but then again I'm Thalia obsessed) but the line in Persephone's ending with, "picking flowers and eating cereal" made me smile.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future,

Thalia Castellan.
Ramzes chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Wow, this is wonderful! I must admit that I haven't read TLO just yet, 'cause it's not published here, but I'm intended to purchase it anyway. I think you have them all spot on.
felisha chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
your story was so good. but after i read it i cried for half an hour no joke. your a very good writer. you should do other peeps
bianca di Angelo chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
It was NOT a waste of your time. It IS kinda angesty, but in a very good way. i love lady hestia's , i don't realy like Thalia's part to dosn't like luke like that.
StraddlingTheAtmosphere chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Oh, I really liked it, particularly Rachel's and Hades' last lines. They really sum them up.
Nightmare Before Halloween chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Nice, but Nico is missing and it's a tad too short.
Okmijn9013 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Nice but I'm sad, no Nico.

haha sdorry I think all fics should at least have his name in there, lol.

Great job, I think you could make each line a little lnoger, but besides that freat job!
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