'i understood what she was doing, she had been jealous of Rachel and thalia' Okay first of all thalia is a hunter and she's percy's cousin, i know gods don't have DNA but zeus ,posidon, and hades are brothers so it wouldn't be like apollo camper dating demter camper because demeter and apollo don't have the same mom or dad nether did any of zeus's god/godess childeren except apollo and artimes, there only related on zeus's side, and secend of all Rachel is the oracle and she knew about percy and annabeths relationship she just interfered in the beginning of TLO for some reason? also wouldn't chiron not have sound proof cabin's so he could know whats going on in them. but enough with the strange logic of greek mythology and sience. good story.

Good story loved it

This was great! If anyone reads the comments read this: I read a story of percebeth, but a really sad one annabeth was kidnapped by a roman warrior and toutured so bad she actually asked Percy to kill her. I'm not giving anymore details but it's a must read!

I loved it but i would love it more if it was more dirty
Dont blame me

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loved it!

Ending could have been longer, but I liked it

Great story mate

Cool

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Ahh yah

Shrieked.

you should write a male x male one! PLEASE?

Awesome

hahahahahahah earth shaker i get it

Ha! So fun and hot! Uff I was like OMG the hole thing! Hahaha perfect this is better than am underwater kiss ;) ok maybe not so romántica but definitly more realistic I mean come con they wer 16! Haha at least I was waiting forma a make-our sesion but uncle Rick wasn't going to write that :(