Oh it is over :P Sorry for the delayed realization, I can't wait to read your other stories

I love this story! Tenten does seem highly undeveloped the more you write this. It's not over is it? I can't wait to read more :D

I read this entire story on my mobile and Form of Freedom too! I think both were great and I'll try to put in reviews for most of the chapters now that I'm at my destop again, but this is just to let you know I really liked these two stories:) (I haven't read others yet)

I really liked how Tenten progresses from a second-hand diluted ideology (partly because I can relate. Normal people just don't go through life with a burning drive like most fictional characters do.) to finding true motivation. I remember being really touched by the Third Hokage's funeral and all subsequent flashbacks to it . and I thought you described it pretty well here. You did the fighting scenes pretty well too. (sorry if my vocabulary is limited X)

thank you, thank you, thank you! finally found a fic that does tenten's character justice. there aren't many good ones out there.

i esp. love chap 1 and 7. a great read, thanks for sharing!

kenni

I realy loved this story. Not just for the fact the character was Tenten, but for the way it was written. Really a wonderful story.

Though, I sort of wonder why you went with Tenten. Is it because she has the least sort of back ground? Either way, I hope to see you making more stories and having fun with it too.

This was beautifully written, I'm not too sure if I can put it any other way. It's great to see a history given to my favourite Naruto character, and they all seem quite believable.

I'll admit though, at first I assumed that each of the chapters would be connected. However, I believe the way in which you'd written it works perfectly well and it just add more possibilities to the secrets of Tenten's life.

this is a great story

Chapter one and six stand out among the rest; although all of them are pretty well done in comparison. Please keep on making more chapters! I love this story; it justifies the reason why Tenten was created by Masashi Kishimoto in a very realistic manner.

"Blep" signs out

I. Love. This. Chapter.

It all seems to work out so well, and it makes perfect sense. And I can see her working hard just for her name to become known. Sorta like Naruto, but different. Great job.

are the chapters connected or something? but like in chapt 1, her father was alive when she started the academy while not in chapt 2? so im guessing its not connected?

Your stories are very engaging and with the addition of your great writing skills plus awesome character portrayal and likeness it has become one of the best Tenten fanfics I have ever read! I look forward to reading more chapters from. This story definitely deserves more attention and love from more readers!

Keep Writing

-Eucharion

Aww...I liked that one. It was really, really sweet! I liked it better than the Neji one, that's for sure! .

!Sapphy!

I really can't write anything this story is just that brilliant and ARGH it makes me so frustrated that I can't type my feelings up properly and JEEZ this story is beautiful.

Oh wow I love this chapter. You made all the characters in-character and you write so beautifully and I really can't describe my feelings as I read your story.

P-please update soon.

I really love this story so far. You've characterized all of them very well, and I like how you're showing different things that could've happened. So far, I think that the first one is the most plausible, but I like each of them.