Epic

Beautiful.

Literally couldn't read this in class because it's that good. xP You wrote this absolutely amazingly. The descriptions are wonderfully detailed and the second-person narrative just makes it all the moree immersive. Love it! Well done!

That was awesome! It brought back memorie's and really made me think about the change of Nagisa's character. Loved it! ]

Nice you really put pout the Lemon in it

Oh my. My glasses are all steamed up _

Seriously though, I love your version's ending to the story. This feels more emotionally genuine than the anime's ending.

Please write more stories!

Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! I'm on a kill-I mean REVIEWIN' spree! LOL

Now, THIS...was...AW3SOME!

B-E-A-Utiful! Simply B-E-A-Utiful!

That's just all I can say.

Outstanding work!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Amazing. Simply amazing.

I love your writing style. I, myself, am wondering why I haven't read this before. What imagery.

I loved it.

Wow. That was one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. The atmosphere could truly be cut with a knife, and you've managed to make me love this pairing even more than I already did.

Please, write more. You're a fantastic writer.

This was:

-well written

-incredibly sexy

-very much romantic

-and about probably the most awesome 'pairing' of SP, so that makes me double happy!

I love how this takes place a year after the Etoile election (the last part being, of course, ignored) with Nagisa, from this unique POV, being described as a young woman who has matured, and who has found love in the arms of her wonderful friend Tamao. I actually don't read SP FanFiction, but I'm glad I took my chances on this one. Well done!

m...I dont know what to say. Honestly speaking: options like Great story or Good job, I've never seen anything like this...they are just too cliché -.-!

Im gonna try giving you my opinion:

I'm not a T&N fan, but, I must say, this story has ruined the opinion I had about their relationship.

I've seen a lot of stories like this one, I certainly enjoy reading them, and yours was not the exeption, on the contrary, I like it the most.

;)

That's all I can say.

Take care.

Goodnight.

Wow, that was truly amazing. 0-0

Very unique writing style. I've never seen anything like this before. I feel as though using the "you" and "your" give a stronger connection between the reader and character. Definately a great story. A must-read for all those TamaoxNagisa lovers out there :)

Nice. I really enjoyed the way you switch from sex to reflection to give a bit of insight into the relationship between the characters.

"You knew this was coming the moment you took her hand." A very good line that sums up how Tamao would fall for Nagisa all over again, if only given the chance.

One suggestion though, and this may just be a personal preference, but reading the word 'crotch' makes me think of locker rooms and football. That is my single complaint from this very enjoyable fic. Try another word that sounds a bit more graceful to keep from disturbing the tone. Other than this one small thing, your fic is very, very good.

Now, if you take any requests, I'd love to see what you would do with a Miyuki-centered fic.

Very intresting, I do like the seriousness of the story, plus I love the NagisaXTamao pairing, awesome story.