Reviews for 50 words
roxygoth chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
This was quite cool. Good job, Roxy
Officially Skipper chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
Bedside and Divorce- Aw poor Skipper!
FashionablyHospitable chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Nicely done. There aren't enough PoM stories out there.
auroraminamino chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
this is fun to read!
8annie81 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Would you ever do a story on what really happend in Denmark?
GrandOldPenguin chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
You packed lots of good, funny, in-character material into a small space. I'm glad I took a few moments to read through your "50 Words" piece today.
flyingbird27 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Loved it, especially the word "Guilt".
Enji86 chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
I like the language part. So funny! And cry part. So sweet!
A.C. the pink brit chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
awsome, it good
none yet chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Wow. I won't lie. I almost left because of the misspellings in your author's comments. But I'm glad I didn't. Wow. As Kowalski would say... "Now that's poetry."

A few of your lines didn't flow as well as some of the others, and you left out a few words here and there. For example: "Fail – Rico may have slightly (or extremely) psychotic, but he never failed to deliver when he was needed." You left out "been." "Rico may have BEEN slightly..."

And this kind of disturbed me: "Cannibalism – Rico had panicked when he saw the ticking time bomb still in Skipper's flipper as Alice made her way into the penguin habitat; though he had to admit, Skipper tasted pretty good." :)

But...wow. Beautiful. I'm impressed.
ggreen7295 chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
This was great!
Rhodonite chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
This is Rose speaking, but Violet loved it too- I laughed so hard that my mom had to take me to the hospital to get oxygen. Haha, not really. But I DID laugh pretty hard.

My favorite sentences, from least to greatest, are Accent, Rock'n'Roll, and Cannibalism. Keep writing!
Gatorgirl4521 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
OMG I just love this! Like Esperata said you pick up on those little details very well. Poor Skipper and his divorce.. :'(
Esperata chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
OMG! I laughed so hard I scared the dog.

A brilliant mix of sweet and hilarious, thoughtful and idle. I loved how you picked up on tiny details and expanded... like Private owing Kowalski $5.

But oh! Poor Skipper hurting over his divorce. Such a contrast to the funniness of Rico sneezing an anchor on Kowlaksi!

So many things I could comment on (the penguins listened to Bon Jovi in Madagascar 2 for example) but I'd end up writing a longer reveiw than the actual story! It just makes me want to discuss in detail exactly why every line here is so perfect!

Kudos!
Colourless Sunsets chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
I could see every one of these moments happening, from the movies and TV show or not.

I look forward to seeing some more of your fics!
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