Having grown up on the mother's milk that is "Bookworms and Booya", I have to say that this radical departure is uncomfortable and depressing.

Sorry, but I don't like depressing stories.

well, this story indeed is a sad one... but it's still good.

but for me.. i'll stick with the belief that the other storyline is the real one... and that this one is more like a nightmare come true for little Sally...

Thanks for writing such excellent stories.

gah! poor...poor everyone! i don't know who to feel most sorry for! PLEASE update soon!

wow, this is shocking...zell's been so..immature? less than perfect? i'm confused. I can't wait to find out more information!

hehehe i love Seifer. So...ADD and cracked-out. :D Fabuluous chapter, as per usual. Can't wait for more!

Omg. This was a great chapter! I love the tension between Zell and Marshal, and I love how Zack is so over-protective. Did someone choose to turn back time to acheive something? Or is this reality just a dream, and the actual reality is the one Sally just "woke up" from?

ahh! amazing, as usual. can't wait for more :)

oh no! so sad! so the man could be seifer-it sure sounds like him-but I wonder what that has to do with sally's coma. It's interesting that she did that combat move, because that shows her *body* remembers, and not just her mind. Which means stuff actually happened? I don't know. UPDATE SOON! Your stories are pretty much the only ones worth following on ffnet anymore!

gah so good! but too short! is marshal making up that he and sally were together? this is so weird!

so good~ actually in your older fics I kind of shipped sally/marshal in a mild way (of course, zell/sally and ahndra/marshal were still the best) so this is pretty sweet for me :D can't wait to read more!

AH OMG OMG NO. I've been following this story for about six years...it's amazing how you manage to bring up so many twists and turns...her life with zell had BETTER not be just a dream! is the guy at the end of each chapter zell?