This story is amazing and if it is discontinued I was wondering if I could adopt it on Wattpad?

Okay, so I just finished watching Death Note this weekend and I was looking for a nice Fanfiction crossover and it looks like I found one. First the characters are interested and well-motivated. Though Paul is a bit hard to follow. The writing style isn't what other writing styles fanfics I read but I like it nonetheless.
Though I do have one criticism: The world just survived Kira, don't you think that we would have more references to him.
It's a good fanfic and I hope you return to it.

Wow, I really like this story. Funny since I'm actually part of the Death Note fandom rather than the Batman fandom. I've watched the movies, but I'm not really an extreme fan. Though yes, I do love the characters of Joker and Batman.

I usually never enjoy a story with OCs, but you have made them so realistic that I can't help but think they were canon characters. They have their own personality and thoughts, and each of the narration styles are different. You must have put a lot of effort into this, and it really paid off apparently.

I've been reading non-stop all day and I think Ryan and Paul are my favorite characters so far. I'm thinking Paul has the shinigami eyes now? If so, that's cool. Please update whenever you can, the plot and writing style are addictive to read.

Love this crossover. Please update as soon as you can. There are hardly any Batman/deathnote crossovers. :)

This story is still really awesome, but I'm a little confused about one thing.

Spoiler for TDKR: Bruce Wayne has no cartilage in his left knee after the incident with Harvey Dent. He needs a brace to use that leg properly, and he only gets one after he decides to return as Batman.

Maybe I have my facts wrong, but it seems that Batman couldn't have been at the Jewelry Exhibit to save Tori since he couldn't walk without a brace or a cane.

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Such an incredible story... takes two of my fav franchises ever and mashes them together so beautifully. I love it. Still, I'd recommend a little more of Bats and the Joker in the story. Not that your OCs aren't fantastic, cuz they are, but without Dark Knight characters, it feels as if it could be any city, and its supposed to be Gotham. Especially since you've written Joker so well in the past.

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. I love how you're weaving the two worlds together so believably! Please keep it up, the pacing, the original!Shinigami and their chosen humans... I know this might be an older story but, from someone who loves it, please update soon? _

I didn't like reading from Batman's POV. It feels awkward reading the monologue of such an epic character, especially when that monologue mostly comprises of merely setting the scene rather than brooding about justice.

Glad you picked this back up, its very original and even though I read the previous chapters a while back I remembered the story line, its very interesting and that's what makes it memorable for me.

PLEASE! bring this story back from the dead. you have something great here, and no competing stories. it's been three years, but you can bring it back from the grave.

I started reading this, and I absolutely love it. Near is my favorite character from DN, and Batman is just awesome. :D However, no updates in two years? D: Is it still being written?

Intriguing premise, and I like your writing style.

My only little crit at this point would be that the first human PoV (the student) feels a bit too similar to the Joker fan, in terms of tone and the way he thinks.

Looking forward to reading on,

Tom Reagan

Can't wait till you're back from your hiatus.

Aww, darn. I'd be careful, sometimes stories can get removed if they have a chapter that's just an author's note.

Paul isn't going to get along very well with Izanami, that becomes clearer and clearer with each chapter. He's so egotistical that nothing will make a dent on him, not even a shinigami. Nor will the Joker thank him if he somehow does get Batman to hang up his cape for good. I think he may be the first of these three to crack. He's too highly strung, and quite out of touch with reality already.

Ryan proves that he can think on his feet, although confessing to pyromania can only prove awkward when he has to explain it to his mother. I can foresee a spree ahead, once he and his shinigami start talking. He is already prepared to kill, after all.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter a lot-.

J.