Hi I have just finished this story and Just thought I should say it was quite good ( ok very good).

I really liked the it started just like JK book, and the way you use the characters.

I think now go and read The sequel, and see if it is as god as this one.

Thanks for souch good entertainment

Very nice! I loved how you maintained JK Rowling's characters' personalities- unlike a lot of the other fanfictions written about Harry Potter. My only criticism is that you could make Albus Dumbledore be a bit more profound, like he is in the books. You know, like fatherly? And just one tiny thing- it's Avada Kedavra, not Avada Kadava! ;)

this needs a sequal

I like this you should write more! Cheers

its great...needs more lupin though...i also read the boy wh cired wolf...i kinda got 2 reveiw, so i'll tell u this now, its great. l liv it. lupin rox. i mite go back and reveiw it l8er, but...anywho...pheonixes destiny rox. sirius was awesome! still needs more remeus though. Mooney rox...

good story! now i'm off to read the sequal.

Cool. I can't wait to read chpter 2!

hi Bex

I just read it again, it seems ages since you gave it to me for a bday present!

now go and review Setting Suns!

:)

Love it. Please update soon.

Oh man i missed a lot while i was in the hospital. This was a really good story keep it up.

Alex

I think this was a great story and you should make a series because it seems like it can go on. Well, it's your choice. Good luck on future stories!

Thats all you wrote?

Albus

Cool. I can't get to the next chapter now as the site it experaincing problems!

Albus

sweet, love it, never knew this place existed, but now, sweet, although, the story left a few interesting things out

It's a good story; you will want to consider these corrections, though:

You said

"He picked up a pinch of the powder threw it into the fire, called out Diagon Alley before stepping into the emerald fire and disappearing.

Harry opened his eyes a few minutes later to find he had appeared in Diagon Alley and was standing outside the wizard bank Gringotts."

You need to know that Floo Powder only works from one fireplace to another fireplace. That's how the Floo Network works. You can't just appear in Diagon Alley in front of Gringotts. You might be able to apparate there, but not Floo. You could Floo to the fireplace of the Leaky Cauldron, or to another fireplace in any shop along the Alley - but not just into a street.

Then at QQS, you wrote,

"The Lightening Bolt. This magnificent broom runs rings round the old Firebolt. It's twice as fast and twice as safe."

Lightening and Lightning are two different words.

Lightening refers to gradations of lightness: "He started lightening his burden by putting down his shopping bags." OR "The sky at dawn starts lightening a half-hour before sunrise."

Lightning, on the other hand, is an electrical surge between sky and ground. No "E" in the word.

Cheers,

David