Continued please

As a GrimmRuki fan, this both shocked me, and impressed me, lol. XD I love the way you write thought. And reading the end seemed like they'red be a continuation. Will there be?

Make an m rated version of this fic please!

I personally say this is one of my favorite stories in all personally I would want you to find a way to continue it

Awesome work, I love it sooo much

Wow this is dark! It's really really interesting and I really enjoyed reading it even though I felt bad for poor Rukia.

Great job!

Really interesting fic. Grimmjow for all that he is- arrogant, a brute, one who seems to care about only getting stronger, it is interesting to see him expressing his feelings for someone else, especially a shinigami he tried to kill before. I really found his actions to be in character, and I like the way you write him as a character.

I can understand why Grimmjow reacts violently, when he tells Rukia he loves her and she laughs at him, not taking his words seriously. Grimmjow probably had never loved anyone before and found himself loving her, so when she rebuffs him, he loses control for a minute because he doesn't know how else to react. His actions of killing anyone who tries to take her away from him, are also interesting. He doesn't take into account that he is hurting her by killing those she cares, and only thinking about keeping her with him, which shows that his feelings of love are new to him. He won't lose the first person who has brought out these feelings of love. It's almost as if Grimmjow needs Rukia in order to be able to kill breathing. He doesn't want to hurt her, and does feel regret for his actions. He is not sadistic towards her, he does truly love her. he seems very much like a child when he reacts violently, reacting before he is aware of the consequences of his actions. He doesn't seem to realize his own strength.

Rukia does find herself in a tricky, dark situation. An arrancar, an enemy of hers, has told her he is in love with her. I can see her not believing his words, for in the past he has tried to kill her on multiple occasions. Now she finds out that Grimmjow has kidnapped her, bringing her back to Hueco Mundo for his own reasons. She probably can't get past him being a hollow, forgetting he has a part of shinigami in him, so she probably believes he is not capable of love. During the months that Grimmjow has kept her in Hueco Mundo, he probably has shown a bit of his gentle side to her, but she probably doesn't realize his kindness for her. For example he does make sure to keep her away from other arranger for he doesn't want them to hurt her. He also waited months before he decided to take her, hoping she would accept her situation after months, instead of just forcing himself on her the moment he kidnapped her and took her to Hueco Mundo. Grimmjow is not a patient man, but he did restrain himself for months probably because he did not want to hurt her. Though his actions are subtle, his actions do show he does care for her, he just doesn't know ho to express himself correctly.

In the end Rukia does accept her fate once she realizes she is pregnant. she claims she loves Grimmjow, though I think she does this to get used to the idea she can no longer escape him.

I really liked this fic. It has a unique and intriguing plot, your writing is amazing, and the story is just addicting. GrimmRuki is one of my favorite pairings (along with IchiRuki, HichiRuki) and I like how you wrote them in this fic. I really love your fics, and I hoping you write a sequel for this or maybe a prequel showing how Grimmjow became aware of his feelings for Rukia. I also hope you write more fics like this. Thank you once again for such an amazing story

I like the style and characterization of the story! Good job!

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Oh,I love this so much!The best part is that I can actually imagine Grimmjow and Rukia being like I love how you made Grimmjow ,one of my favorite GrimmRuki stories.

I'm so thrilled after reading this fanfic! This was definitely a unique pairing! To think that in th anime Grimmi tried to blow off Rukias head with a cero and here he is ... W.O.W.

Do you have any other fanfic ideas like this one ... maybe one with Ori/Ulqui or Hollow Ichi and Ruki?

Amazing fiction! *cough*I've been meaning to write this review, like, forver*cough*

Your portrayal of characters are done without even an scent of ooc-ness, which I madly appreciate, especially when it comes to two of my favourite characters, and obviously, a very beloved pairing aswell.

My favourite GrimmRuki ever, I congratulate you and sincerely hope that you write more :D

This one hit like a punch in the gut. Beautifully tragic.

I liked this, Grimms like a little child almost..a really dangerous, semi-evil child with warped love issues but yeah. XD If he learns to be gentle just a bit maybe she'll warm up to him.

I love this story, I save page this story, I bookmark this story and now you have the idea how much I like this one right? Yeah... Dark and obsession. Oh... I love Grimm because he love Rukia like some three years old child. Can't have it... broke it. And he's sorry because he hurt her. He... feel bad by doing so, still Rukia not trust him. And in the end... even though Grimm can have her... He still call her shinigami. And when Rukia said she love him... I don't know, I just can believe these words. Simply because she said it for her safety and her child future.

And wow! You're not using conversation at all. Simply put it like that, and it add some dramatic features! Great! Oh... And from not, I will give active review. Because You're such a great author! Love you, Yume!

dude that was deep. dude awsome, can't wait to read more of your bleach. Rukia and Grimmjow are 2 of my fav characters. but this was awsome. 5 PAWS WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY UP! XD