Reviews for Better Than Me
Freudian Slips Cause Problems chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
You should finish this with a happy ending. The Liley world needs more of those from the good writers. Pretty Please?
Blank. No longer in use chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
One last happy ending chapter? Please? This is killing me, the fact they are both in love with each other but without the guts to admit it. Oh please, make me a happy happy person :)
Account Awaiting Deletion chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
How did I miss this? Man... ah well. Least I could read it now.

I'm depressed... meanie. Beautifully written, though. I loved the flashbacks especially... that last one was so full of unspoken kisses. (I nicked that from somewhere. Point still stands, though.)

Poor Lilly... I shall have to be nice to her now, just to make it up to her. ;P

-Ellejay
freakinacage1234 chapter 2 . 6/19/2009
this is really sad :( I think you should do another chapter!
inlovewithMileyCyrus chapter 2 . 6/10/2009
where is that quote from? this is really good. the song is beautiful. it has very deep meaning and i love it.
AlvinFan07 chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
Sad :( one more chapter would be cool :) If not, this was really good
IkarusCazadores chapter 2 . 5/30/2009
please put up another chapter and give them a happy ending!
DonH chapter 2 . 5/25/2009
Lilly's POV is exactly what i went through with my best friend lol... she moved to the other side of the world a month later.. Your story hits home for me a lot. amazing writing. I hope miley and lilly can have the happy ending that so many people miss out on.
Jerk-i-ness chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
Well i think you ought to continue! Like you said, everyone loves some sort of a happy ending! And you write the emotion so well. I call for one more chapter! :)
lita rocks LbC chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
oh man .. that quote hits home. that's me and the person i used to call my best friend. we don't even talk anymore, and the pain is unbearable. sigh*

loved it though .. i really loved it. it's great. awesome. amazing. again, i loved the flashbacks. i hope things turn out well for them!

great job.
lita rocks LbC chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
that was great. i love the little flashbacks and everything. great job.
Nof chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
I think you should do one last chapter..

and just an idea, not one that leaves me feeling completely and utterly depressed.

But that always show skill in writing, which you obviously have.
Janie chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Amazing. You should definetely do a sequel. oh & I loved the song. It was very fitting for the story.
KLSmith chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
LOVED IT, please let there be more soon. Please!
MysticFalls94 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
THis was sad but great. I hope you add more to it.
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