The chapters before where really interesting and fun. But retreading cannon 1 to 1 with raven being replaced by jinx is super boring to read.

Reached chapter 18 and liking the story so far. There were some things I didn't like. When Midnight lost so badly to the Titans that she fainted. Quite disappointing. I expected her to have contingency plans atop contingency plans. Slade didn't teach her that apparently.

Why did she decide to continue fighting instead of escaping when she thought that Batman himself came to fight her? The logical thing would have been to make a strategic retreat.

Why was her Ai betraying her? How did trygon got the robots allegiance?

And why didn't Midnight put up a better fight against the Titans? Why did you make the good guys so strong?

This is so frustrating. I am rooting for Midnight to win. I want her to be a winner!

I've really enjoyed this story! I love AUs like this, where one small change affects so many things. I hope you update it at some point, I'd love to read more.

Hi,
I like this story. The characters feel alive and dynamic, and the plot flows quite well.
There are some flaws, such as misspellings, wrong words, or missing letters. Nothing a good proofread can't fix!
I look forwards to the next installment to this story.

Hey I was wondering if you are going to update this story anymore. It's a very good piece of work, with a clear plot and deep characters which people can accosicate with. This has got to be one of, if not the BEST Teen Titans story there is. I really enjoy the whole concept, which is pretty unique in itself, and I really like how Raven is not paired with anybody else. Please keep writing this story, as it is EXTREMELY well-written and I cannot tell you just how much the characters and their thoughts, feelings, and emotions, mean to me.

Please tell me your coming back to this? I must know how things are going to play out.

:)

Visions, a pain in the tail and barely useful.

So, will Slade be as bad for her as he was for Terra or be more closer to a true parental figure?

A very good story. The changes in the characters from canon are believable.
By my impression, Ravens greatest weakness here so far is that she is too stuck on her own p.o.v. and too quick to judge others.
One example is that she instantly dismissed Tim Drake as an "ignorant boy", while in truth she knew nothing about the entire situation, all that while Slade, in opposite to her, quickly figured out that Bruce Wayne was far more than he let show.
The situation with Slades riddle and his reaction to her anwer is also well portrait.

A short comment:
About the riddle, I think both Slade and Raven oversee one important aspect. I think a pragmatic and self serving person, as Slade had put it, would in fact spare the king, because he is the only one who can pardon him for the other two murders and would be able to give him a reward anyway. The rich man might maybe be able to offer him more, but since he would be probably on the run for murdering the king at this point, it would be very questionable if he would ever see anything of the money.

This chapter is rather unusual as it considers Batman. A good portion of people forget about the Dark Night and Robin's relationship in the Teen Titans.

This is a fascinating take on the path of Raven. Also, the poor guy, that decision was lose-lose. Although with a week of thought, I think my decision would have been to condemn my city for the world as "one cannot sit idly by while his fellow man is in danger" — Old Testament

This is a great story, looking forward to more!

This story is every bit as good as a "What if?" Or elseworlds Comic series.

Keep it up.

Brilliant :D

For some reason the scene at the end with Raven in the chamber really reminded me of Sidious and Vader, when Vader is getting fixed after Mustafar. Master and Apprentice, Darth Deathstroke and Darth Midnight.

I would have liked Raven to curbstomp Midnight. That was what I would have preferred. But then I like to see the Bad guys and Good guys constantly one upping each other with surprises. Where neither the good or evil guys are certain of victory. Here's hoping for more thrilling episodes of Jewel of Darkness.