| Reviews for Two Broken Hearts |
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Guest chapter 30 . 6/17/2016 It was a great concept. You just need a beta to clean up the story and make it flow smoothly. There's lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. But a solid 6/10. |
chemistrykim chapter 2 . 8/16/2015 lol you got me i thought that was real not a dream! |
BurningWillow3 chapter 9 . 10/6/2012 omg this is really good:D i just love a jealouse jacob it makes him SOOO much sexier doesnt it lol great job btw:D |
Guest chapter 30 . 7/6/2012 where is the drama gone |
Guest chapter 25 . 7/5/2012 dun dun |
Guest chapter 24 . 7/5/2012 Finally the moment I have been waiting for came i love blackwater stories |
Guest chapter 19 . 7/3/2012 sooooooooo please do more sam drama |
IBTeri chapter 14 . 3/29/2012 so funny |
Karatekid-Ninja chapter 30 . 2/25/2011 THIS IS GREAT! I CANT WAIT TO READ THE SEQUEL! |
O.oBlueFreako.O chapter 7 . 7/25/2010 whats the song called? |
O.oBlueFreako.O chapter 2 . 7/25/2010 i think i like jaob and leah better then jacob and nessie i dont know why i just do |
LissaHuff chapter 30 . 7/24/2010 I am so in love with this story! This had an excellent plot line, thank you for sharing it with the world! |
LissaHuff chapter 29 . 7/24/2010 I don't want this story to end! : ( |
LissaHuff chapter 27 . 7/24/2010 Are Eddie and Ali gonna get together? |
LissaHuff chapter 26 . 7/24/2010 I love it, but sometime you should go back and fix the typos, and have different people's diolouge in different paragraphs. |