Reviews for Two Broken Hearts
Guest chapter 30 . 6/17/2016
It was a great concept. You just need a beta to clean up the story and make it flow smoothly. There's lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. But a solid 6/10.
chemistrykim chapter 2 . 8/16/2015
lol you got me i thought that was real not a dream!
BurningWillow3 chapter 9 . 10/6/2012
omg this is really good:D i just love a jealouse jacob it makes him SOOO much sexier doesnt it lol great job btw:D
Guest chapter 30 . 7/6/2012
where is the drama gone
Guest chapter 25 . 7/5/2012
dun dun
Guest chapter 24 . 7/5/2012
Finally the moment I have been waiting for came
i love blackwater stories
Guest chapter 19 . 7/3/2012
sooooooooo
please do more sam drama
IBTeri chapter 14 . 3/29/2012
so funny
Karatekid-Ninja chapter 30 . 2/25/2011
THIS IS GREAT! I CANT WAIT TO READ THE SEQUEL!
O.oBlueFreako.O chapter 7 . 7/25/2010
whats the song called?
O.oBlueFreako.O chapter 2 . 7/25/2010
i think i like jaob and leah better then jacob and nessie i dont know why i just do
LissaHuff chapter 30 . 7/24/2010
I am so in love with this story! This had an excellent plot line, thank you for sharing it with the world!
LissaHuff chapter 29 . 7/24/2010
I don't want this story to end! : (
LissaHuff chapter 27 . 7/24/2010
Are Eddie and Ali gonna get together?
LissaHuff chapter 26 . 7/24/2010
I love it, but sometime you should go back and fix the typos, and have different people's diolouge in different paragraphs.
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