Great job, it was only short, but you did it well.
Well done, keep writing and posting

YES! Angela plays saxophone. Alto, right?

A bit short, but that doesn't make it less interesting.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

This was really sweet story! I like Jasper's reaction to Angela. It's sad that he can't form relationships with humans even though he wants to. It's spot on to his attitude in the books thought. He wanted to embrace Bella as a sister but couldn't because of the thirst. Poor Jasper!

Haha! I love Angela! Jasper and Alice forever!:) You amazing author, you!:)

awesome...luvd the last line

this was really good.

Wonderfully written, I must say.

Jasper has always been a mystery to me, no matter what, and I think he always will be.

But this was good, definitely!

I LOVE JASPER!

haha nice ending, can't wait for Bella in Business :)

Aww I love Jasper. And I love Angela. It was great. Angela probably would be good at sax lol. I felt bad when Jasper accidentally breathed in, but even without being there, Alice saved him again. That last line was great. Loved it. Looking forward to Bella and Emmett. :D

Ha! That was cute! I love Jasper. -sighs- Angela's comment is kinda funny. lol. Nice job!

-MLJ

Woo! It's Jasper... :)

Aw, I love Jasper/Angela friendship-ness. It's so cute. This one is definitely my favourite, but that isn't surprising seeing as how it's Jasper. :D

Raven. x

cool chappy ;D

Good story in showing Jasper's view of Jazz band class.

it's sarah I just can't be bothered signing in :)

GO ANGELA she plays the sax too *wohoo*

but it better be tenor saxophone- that's the cool one not the massive one not the teensy one but the cool one ;)

this is so fantastic

and i love it very muchly

sarah xx