Reviews for Wolf's Way |
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qGjx7 chapter 1 . 9/3/2018 Veri n1c3KtRst0riqR |
mosshadow chapter 3 . 9/19/2009 try switching to the packs POW |
mosshadow chapter 2 . 9/19/2009 kinda copied... |
mosshadow chapter 1 . 9/19/2009 hey, some stuff from gahoole!YAY! |
Sunshine Samich chapter 2 . 5/27/2009 The only thing I would suggest is to break down the big paragraph before the chant. xP You've got a great vocabulary and imagination. :) |
Dreamergirl29 chapter 2 . 5/24/2009 What does the rest of the pack do after Angel leaves? What if Vitalli follows them and hears what was said and doesn't tell anyone else? Does Vitalli bring Angel back to the pack or is she too frightened? |
Sunshine Samich chapter 1 . 5/18/2009 GREAT, easy read! You write very fluently. :) However, I haven't any foreknowledge of the series. xP But I enjoyed it nonetheless. :) |
Psychotic Cupcake chapter 1 . 5/18/2009 This is from the book The sight, right? By David Clement Davis? I think you're doing a good job and deserve a thumbs up! (If this isn't form the book I'm talking about then I have no clue what this is based on and would really like to know!) |