Please update! It's a nice story

Ehh it's ok

Hehe sixth step huh, gosh i really want to know what second step is so update hurry please

U.P.D.A.T.E :D it was :D

please write more. i think i saw your work. it said in just my luck the auther of that story worte a story with the same name. I really like this. i wonder if dawn likes ash back. i love to sing and thought the conversation was a very nice touch to the story. i think u sould make dawn sing a song in front of everyone.

This is very good and I can't wait for chapter 3!

ERROR - CHAPTER 3 WAS NOT FOUND.

NUUUUUUUU! You're doing such a great job already! D:

I hope you update eventually :/

the story si going really great I think you should make more chapters and stories ! I can't wait for the next one ! Please write more chapters and stories!

what do i do next. IT'S A CHAIR GO SIT DOWN! I was laughing so hard my guts still ache!

Aww this is really Sweet. 3

Please write More!

x

SweetMaylene

I'm not a big fan of pearl shipping but all of this Gary teaching Ash kept me laughing through the whole thing!

Listen. I have an idea for a new pearlshipping story!

Why don't you do twilight version when ash is like edward and dawn is like bella?

You gotta update! I need to know "The six steps" I'm having as much luck with the girls as Brock!

The first step doesn't seems to hard, I hope the next one isn't that hard either :P

please sir may i have some more?

lmao

but serisously your good at time so keep writing!

UPDATE!