I really enjoyed reading this story. I haven’t read a lot of Twilight fics like this one either, and I really like how you had Bella and Edward explore sexuality. Which is pretty high praise from me, considering—lol that I’ve read so many smutty fanfics that I can actually critique porn now. Anyways, thanks for writing this, it was a good read.

I found evil Esme an interesting variation to the norm. Her storyline is rather tragic. She didn't ask for that life, but it's intriguing how she chose to be all twisted when she woke up to it. Otherwise, a fun bit of fluff. Thanks.

She doesn't love him. She left him and demanded he stay away. Only came back to curse him over writing stuff about her.

I feel like you turned Edward into a complete pussy the past 3-4 chapters. Esme was right, he less of a man. He doesn't have go all evil vamp on her, but I'm saying.. at least fight for her. And show some type of anger when she pops back up on your door steps..

YYESSSSSSSS! I NEEDED SOMETHING LIKE THIS! OMG I'M SO EXCITED TO READ THE REST!

oh, how stupid

Edward wears a WHITE leather jacket? How embarrassing

Bonsoir, Histoire atypique et j'ai bien aimé. Merci

I devoured this story in mere hours. Thank you for writing it!

This was so much fun! I am so glad I found and and who doesn't love an evil Esme! :)

This story was awesome and actually hot as hell, I think that makes me as crazy as Bella but hey!

WTF? what kind of man wears a WHITE leather jacket? How fucking gay is that.

LOL who is the fuck wears a white leather jacket? gross...maybe keep your own like out of the story ya?

Interesting and sexy!

WOW. A fantastic, quick read. I loved that everything about this twi-fic was unique. A few thoughts...
I loved the unique version of bitch-Esme. This is the first time I have seen her portrayed as such. And then insane-Esme... was quite terrifying!
For a few moments there I was thinking that Bella had left Edward and turned towards Carlisle! (in her apt after Esme's demise) Since he introduced Edward to the Ds trunk, that would have been a hot route to take the story too! lol But I was saddened by Carlisle being left lonely.
:(
I am lusting for more of Edward's inner Monster. Him not being afraid of hurting Bella (for once!) was refreshing.
Part way into the beginning of the last chapter, I was certain you were ending it with them apart (since everything else was surprising and unique), but I am happy they got their HEA.
Thank you so much for this story. I really loved it. X

omg 0.0 its soo good