i like it, please make it longer!

hahaa that was unexpectedly funny :)

"where's here?"

"Hogwarts school for witchcraft and wizardry."

LOL

good job with the challenge. :D

oh, that quote..

Goodness, now that made my day :)

I actually really enjoyed this. I miss Fred so much. Sad face.

SS

Please continue.

:)

Haha, I love this challenge and this story (:

I want a Fred! Love the story, I want more please!

I absolutely adored this. They both were extremely in character, and the way you worked the quote in was seamless. I'd love a longer fic with these two, you write them wonderfully!

great job! :)

This was great! It was so smooth and fluid, and your characterisations were great. I think that maybe this should be a T and not an M because it's jus suggestions and bras mostly (*giggles* I'm so immature). But yes, I did really like it!

Very good story, I liked how you worked in the quote, not going for the "obvious" I like Fred and Angelina. Excellent.

OOh, tantilizing on all levels. So very in character. I would love a longer fic because I love how you portray them, and it would be fantastic to see a longer story so that we all could marvel at your characterization. And I LOVED how the smutty quote was used in non smutty context.