wow this was so beautiful really well writen.

Very Nice, i enjoyed that, i adore reading stories from EPOV:)

Hmm..if only she had written this..wow! Thanks to your profoundly rich and wonderful imagination we get a peek into what happened that night. Edward and Bella can only hope it happened exactly as you've said.

Speechless! Wow. I've read a lot of different versions of this particular moment and yours is the best by far. Major kudos to you.

From your word choice (at times like poetry!) to the images you created and the character follow-through. I also appreciate very much that your writing style is fully developed AND error free! That, my friend, is a first for me on this site. Your grammar, punctuation and spelling were flawless so for once I got to just read fluidly without being pulled out by bad English.

On a scale of 1 to 10 this is definitely a 15. Bravo.

This was beautifully written.

That was simply wonderful! So beautiful.