Great story please continue writing it soon

Please continue, i love this so much, unique and really draws a person in, keep going with it please ams thank you

Nice!

omg I wonder if kim really did have powers? thius story looks like it would be so cool, I wish you'd continue soon

interresting start. i find your kim a little 'dark' but maybe it's just because of the new power. i understand the need to concentrate on her and ron (after he killed), but i am much more into the weird relationship between shego and drakken.

I'm intrigued by what Kim's "power" is and I'm dying to find out when the next chapter is coming. I was also interested in Ron's issues with dealing with having to kill the aliens, it's not really addressed much and wasn't at all in the show. Hope to see some more of this great story soon.

great story is it abandoned? if not i would like to see more

i see the start of another great epic.

Here's hoping it's not done for years!

oh please tell me you are going to continue this!

Hey,

What a great premise, and well-implemented too. Not that I'd expect anything different, given your previous works.

Yours,

Jon

this is really awesome!and it makes actual sense...in a way taken from the actual show...X] really good!i can't wait for the next one!

Man I wanna know what exactly happened inthat pool

dud realy hate ron in this chapter

but please more

nice work want more though plz

What on earth kind of powers could Kim possibly have? 0.o Hm...

Whatever it is, I look forward to find out. 8D