Really great

Loved it

after such a long time another great Liley-story ! D that was just the right thing to read on a sunday morning ) good job!

I adored this! I loved the kicking of the inner puppy. I giggled. And I loved Oliver at the end! Fantastic way to end it. :]

This was really good, and it was nice that Oliver didn't seem upset about it at all :) Great little one-shot!

psh, if i was oliver, i would have freaked! rawr.

cute little one shot though )

I loved it

Aw, that's adorable!

this was so good:)

Cool story :), I liked it :).

yeah I think im gonna loved this fic! i love when is always on lilly point of view. keep the good work, my english is not very good, but this was so easy to read.

I personally like it please continue it please with a little something more.

Awesome story. Very cute, and I'm happy that you threw Oliver in at the end to show that he's okay :). My favorite part would have to be Lilly thinking 'I didn't mean to kick her inner puppy', lol. Keep up the good work.

Very cute. Oliver coming out of nowhere at the end made me giggle.

Wow, I liked that! I liked it a lot!

Could maybe benefit from a good beta to iron out the grammar details, (when you're abbrievating 'you are', remember that's what you're doing - for example, 'Your sitting on the couch,' - there, you're shortening the sentence 'You are sitting on the couch', so the apostrophe is needed to do its main job: replacing a letter and becoming 'You're sitting on the couch') but they're just that: minor details, because the rest of the story was so damn good.

There's loads of lovely, smile-causing stuff in there - the inner-dog-kicking sequence was brilliant! Oh, and the acoustics, and the robot! )

Lovely, original and interesting 'getting-together' sequence, too - never seen that particular way of getting the girls together before.

And that ending! Is Ollie turning evil? Or just not that bothered by Miley breaking up with him because... because... I dunno! You do though - so I'd love to see a continuation of this story.