Please continue! This is getting good!

Please update this story again I really miss getting chapters for this book! It's one of my few favs

i like the story I hope you continue it

Please update! Pretty please!

uwawawawawa...?thats all you have ? yo! when are you going to up date? i poopin' love this

Roxas and Xemnas?

-eyes explode-

AAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHHHH!

-a hospital trip later-

ugh, Axel going to have to bite and MATE with him.

MATE

MAT MATE!

awww plz more and i dont mind the grammor and mistakes at all it gives my mind something to use like a work out for the brain :)

Ok please be better with spelling it confused me

n I LOVE THIS!

omg nooo Xemnas cant separated the lion cube and the dragon! D: am not a beta, but if you ever want it I can check the past chapters and correct the mistakes

Just a suggestion buttttttttt, I say Xenmas rapes Roxas . or nearly does OwO.

Lilia.

Okay, I get that you don't want a beta, but I must tell you I COULD enjoy this fic, I really could. It has potential.

Instead, I cringe at it, your spelling mistakes make this story less enjoyable. A good story line and plot can only take you so far, if I have to work harder to understand what you're trying to say, I'm not going to be having fun.

So even if it takes an extra amount of time just look over your story once you type it, rereading is a good habit to have as an author. I hate rereading, but do it anyways, I don't have the patients but I do have the discipline to sit myself down and look over my writing, sometimes I miss mistakes even then, but at least it's not a jumble of errors.

I hope you can take this review with a grain of salt, I am not trying to deter you're writing potential, just letting you know maybe you should watch out for your spelling and grammar.

love the story so far. but ..pleaseeeeee its axel. please. that's the only thing that's making my tummy upset. your ideas and storyline is great. hell, i can even look past the occasional misspelled word. but please change axle to axel. thank you and i huggle you

swet chapter :D a fire dragon and a lion cub! x3

Interesting, I hope you continue it... but please re-format it so that it's easier to read. Every time a new person speaks it should be a new paragraph.

I know at the top you said no comments on spelling or grammar mistakes, but I wanted to comment on a typo, not that. It's Axel, not Axle. An easy way to fix that, if you are using Microsoft Word, is to go to the 'find' tool and find all the 'Axle's and replace them with Axel.