Wow is so cool

You really should update this story. It has soo much meaning. It is displays responsibility that not many people, but need.

You really need to update this story! I've never been so excited for a story! Finish it, pleeeaaassseee!

love your story geat job are you going to finish it?

This story is absolutely awesome and I love it so much! It is just wicked amazing! Those slides at the Bahamas are definitely awesome (I loved going on them when I went there, wish I got to stay in the towers though but either way that trip was the best). And this is awesome, Smitchie need to fully get together! And you really need to update this because it is totally wickedly awesome and deserves to be updated and plus I really want to know what is to happen next and there are tons of others who probably want to know as well.

that was awesome loved it

Hiii. This is an amazing story and i hope tht u cobtinue it.. I know tht it has een like 7 months but please update this!

I hope you update soon this is really good and deserves to be finished :P

please update soon!

Is there going to be a chapter 18?

I love your story, please update :)

I really am looking forward to another chapter. :] will there be another Chapter? Please let me know.

this is a really good story you should so continue it i want to read more pretty please

I love it! serious, but are Mitchie's parents coming back? cause I don't think they are..

hope you upload soon!

AMAZING STORY YOU'VE GOT HERE. I REALLY ENJOYED READING EVERYTHING YOU'VE GOT SO FAR! I READ IT ALL IN ONE SITTING. I'D LOVE FOR YOU TO CONTINUE. I'VE NOTICED THAT YOU HAVE NOT UPDATED FOR A WHILE NOW. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

THANK YOU,

ARIFA