Hermione last name is Jean
I really don't want to sound bossy but Umbridges last name is Jane and she is evil AF

Okay, so I have laughed about twenty times now. I really love the story, but I do have a small OCD complaint. The tense keeps changing, in case you care. But I really do love the story, please don't take this as an insult.

That was fun

hehhe totally loved it
Whoopie
awesome story
please do continue to write more
bye sumi

Loved it! I found myself crying and laughing along with characters. xx

wow, you are incredibly sexist to girls- no carbs, make up?! what the fucking hell, everyone is allowed to be who they want to be and should never be forced into something they don't want to be part of. You are objectifying women and being a complete fuckhead.

Nice story you really should get more reviews

this is the reason i favorited this story now i know why

This would make a good movie! I love it! :)

That's the best fanfic I've read in like.. forever.

i love debbie gibson's "lost in your eyes"! great song choice

loved it!

Very nice story. Mostly well written, great dialogues and scenes.

Cheers,

C.

Well done!

OMG! that is brilliant story! I love it!