Reviews for While You Were Gone |
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SassYNoleS chapter 17 . 4/26 Thank you for sharing this amazing story ! I especially loved the dream scene at the end where Bella was with Charlie Xx |
Jensindenial3516 chapter 17 . 3/31 Thanks! |
TrillionSchiffer chapter 5 . 2/4 Once Again The Carlisle is too damn passive. And Edward is. fucking idiot. |
Kesme chapter 7 . 12/4/2018 I'm glad there was a fight and Bella hasn't completely trusted him yet. Its so annoying how pathetic she is in other fics where she accepts him without a second thought- |
AstrologyQueen chapter 17 . 9/2/2018 Yo, this was fantastic, like, seriously. I know it's hella years later and you probably don't even look at this anymore, but this gave me life. Thank you for writing. |
TheGothicCorset chapter 15 . 8/23/2018 The dreams weren't really a power but actually Bella's mind working through what she already knew. Also Edward being out of reach wasn't a New Moon foreshadowing, in New Moon Bella tells Edward after he returns "It never made since for you to love me I always knew that." meaning she was always insecure about herself and their relationship. If you ever been to S.M's website in her blog it used to talk a manuscript called Forever Dawn, it was basicly Breaking Dawn but the original sequel to Twilight, S.M"s editor told her that it left to much out to be a sequel so she wrote New Moon and later Eclipse to feel in the gaps. |
CoSmO333 chapter 17 . 7/28/2018 I liked this twist on things very interesting awesome job thanks for sharing |
LAB1 chapter 17 . 7/18/2018 Beautiful wedding and such a great gift from Alice. Buttoned that up nicely! |
LAB1 chapter 16 . 7/18/2018 Happy 800 reviews! A stunning gift is as bad as Alec! Yuck! Glad she has that mimic gift now! |
LAB1 chapter 15 . 7/18/2018 Love the precognitive dreams! I always thought so too. Not so into the mimic thing. It's a little too powerful. |
LAB1 chapter 14 . 7/18/2018 Huh. I guess that's not really a great dinner invitation! |
LAB1 chapter 13 . 7/18/2018 That is my dream trip to go on a summer long RV trip up to Alaska! Sigh! |
LAB1 chapter 12 . 7/18/2018 Wow! Tanya is pretty dumb! I'm glad that Rosalie stepped in! |
LAB1 chapter 11 . 7/18/2018 Ewww! Tanya! |
LAB1 chapter 10 . 7/18/2018 Well, it looks like Edward can be taught! I was wondering when Victoria was going to show up! |