Well this was interesting. Great job :)

Very well written. Hope to read more in the future!

Good fic

Good! I had a little panic attack at the end and had to scroll to the top. I was afraid you were done and weren't going to write another chapter. But since your story is not complete that means you are obligated to write another chapter. So there! Until next time, Live Long and Prosper!

Sincerely,

Tara-Yomitorika

This was a story that captured both characters completely. I hope you are doing a second chapter? I've added this to Story Alerts and I'll be waiting!

I realy hope you update soon...its a realy great beginning...

wow, this could get really really hot, good job and update soon!

"Your face is wet." Classic! LOL. Great story.

Beautifully written. I really want to see more.

I'm officially addicted. You better update soon.

The beginning kind of threw me a bit, but I really enjoyed the characterization of Uhura there towards the end. Great job.

GAH!

*Smacks Spock upside the head*

You heard the woman! Show her!

Heh, I like this little shorty, it's very well written and you communicate the tension nicely. It ends a little abruptly, do you intend to continue with a second part? If not I would suggest reviewing your ending and adding a little extra on to sign it off properly.

Doc x

OH MY GOSH! What a great story, I ABOSOLUTELY loved it and want to read more!

touching is an understaded word. this works so well

That was frikin' awesome. Very heartfelt, very strong.