I do like the appreciation to Shikamaru that Temari is like an enigma to him. I assumed this is written when they were married to one another (since Temari let him see her when she was sleeping) but the date of writing had me thinking otherwise, so maybe it's because they are on a Mission together?

Rain having meaning is a fun idea to play with.

It's sometimes funny how those ideas come around. I posted the second chapter to "First Kiss," after playing with an idea too. Ah the fun we can have with fanfiction!

Really nice

It was pretty good. It was very sweet, however I was completely thrown off by Temari all of a sudden, being poisoned. However, I still enjoyed it.

It's beautiful :D