Crying so many tears of feels right now thankyou thankyou thankyou

This is the best story ever written! I really mean it! I never want it to be over!

Oh, that was so cool. I luv narnia.

First things first. I want to thank you so much for this story! There aren't a lot out there with simple (HAPPY) sibling interaction. Either it's slash, incest, angst or whump in some way or another. I refuse to read the first two, and the last two are getting redundant. This was so refreshing and delightful to read.

Secondly, this was extremely well-written! I love the way the youngest two played off each other. Great job!

Thanks again!

This is so cute:3 I want to make a series out of this, but only with your permission. Can I? :)

Awww, so sweet . . . and super funny, too! Their remarks to each other... Sibling bonding fluff full of surprises? The best ever! Awesome, cute, wonderful fic! Love it!

Loved this! So sweet! Great work! :)

-J

I really love this story. Whenever I read it I can imagine Lucy's room the way I envision it. This is a very well written and I like how Lucy gets to move in with her brothers. Really good job!

this was a good story except i don't really like that you made Lucy talk like that she would never talk like that her character is sweet kind and polite and she was not sweet kind and polite in this but is was very well written i love the relationship between Lucy and her brothers

Loved It! :D

Ughhh! This one is perfect! Sequel!

I loved the humour, very nicely done.

Beautiful! Well done!

Hello, Narnian Nights,

I found this story very funny and cute. These three are also my favorite Pevensies, and Id like to thank you for writing about them.

I really liked the fun banter between the siblings, and I thought it was really sweet of the Pevensie boys to have that room for Lucy. Its so like them to do something that sweet! :D

The only small suggestions I would have is the part about Peter and Edmund being gay; back then, gay was mostly used to describe happiness. Maybe replacing the word 'gay' with 'homosexual' would adhere to the times a little more. Thats really it, and you dont really have to change it, its just me being a word freak. :P

Other than that, this was really entertaining and warming to read, and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.

- Annie Featherpen

First of all, I love the idea here. It's a very lovely thing for Peter and Edmund to do, and all three Pevensies are nicely in-character. I also enjoyed the little pokes at certain types of fanfiction that we all wish would go away and ... well, you know. The particular reference to slash was brave (although perhaps a little strident; but that could be my lefty instincts coming out). :)

There were some very funny moments here, too ("What's wrong with Peter?" "Not my type"). A few little spelling mistakes ("weird", "regrettably") but nothing too glaring. The only punctuation issue was at the end of speech; don't forget commas. For example: "It doesn't," Lucy agreed. Rather than a full stop.

Overall, this was very sweet. Well done!