Arghhhh! This was so incredibly hot! My cheeks are burning with heat. Looking forward to read more of your Finder works, hope you have them...

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Hahahah Asami just a bully. Akihito you should have known better than to challenge Asami don't you know you can't win against himXD

that was good

asami is just too sexy. love it

Dear writer,

You have successfully made a children's game smexy and erotic. I applaud thee for that. 'Twas a joy to read. 8)

Sincerely,

Person who got extremely excited while reading your fic trollololol

belle fic, bonne continuation sur tes autres histoires

gods this is one hot fic Please more! your great!

This story is a stroke of sheer brilliance!

I never thought of Twister in that respect, since it's a game that I played as a child and my kids play to this day.

I have a new found respect and a new eye opening image for it now. Who knew you could get all that from an innocent kid's game?

I wonder if my hubby will be interested in a little 1 on 1.

Very sexy! Thank you!

B reading U!

That was the raunchiest Viewfinder fic I have read in a while... ROCK ON! XD It was GREAT! And I even love Twister too! I may never be able to look at that innocent game the same way again... Oh well! D ~Happy thoughts~ Keep up the great work! _

woah...i will never think of twister the same...ahh that was great *floating* Takaba thought he could beat Asami hehee The man is always one step ahead...or two...usually three...

brillant!

now please excuse me while i go get some ctton wool to stop up this nosebleed...it doesnt seem to be stopping anytime soon... *facefloor*

i'd love to play that version of twister some time...i just have to pick the right crowd and we'd all have a riot! _

i like the twister idea, very nice.

you should write another...more kinky...

*coughs* anyway, well done keep it up

Fuckin great bbz

that was amazinly horny stuff u av a vry dirty mind

but i love it lol

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