Awwwh, this had me smiling the whole way through :D

Yellow rat pikachu, couldn't stop laughing, gorgeous!

Awhhh - adorable!

Yup, I can see Larry being Kirby - when I used to play Smash Bros. against my bro, he would be Kirby all the time, suck my character up and then jump off, but would fly up afterwards while I died. It was very annoying. ;)

Everyone is in character, especially Miles - who I can see wanting to win and also dismissing it as a 'kids' game lol ;) Great story!

This was too hilarious for words, seriously. XDDD

And you even had Phoenix yell "Take that!" and mentioned his ability to "turn things around." That. Was. Awesome!

The only mistake was one itty bitty spelling error near the beginning. Nothing important, though.

Know what's funny? Before you named Larry's and Phoenix's chosen characters, I actually imagined them playing with Link and Kirby. Only, I had them switched, for whatever reason. Go figure.

PS: I also really like the "serious" title. Haha. Added the story to my favourites! _

Hilarious! Characterization was spot-on for all three characters, your version of Edgeworth is exactly the same as mine. Grammar was spotty in some places (well, excluding Larry), but I loved it nonetheless. I'm still giggling uncontrollably. Perfect!

I loved it! Especially your descriptions of characters from both games... I'm particularly partial to "the pink thing that ate things". Nice work, keep it up! :D

This is so cute, i love how you portray Miles, Nick and Larry as kids. You have made my day )

i always did the same thing as miles the first time i played that game. _;;

...Larry is a Kirby fan... o.0 But at least Nick was Link. _

This. Is. Hilarious. Awesome Win. You kept everyone in-character, and managed to convey the magic of friendship and the loveable side of children. As well as the amazing thing called Super Smash Brothers. Thank you. XD

AWZ. That's the cutest PW childhood Fic I've read 3 They're so In Character! Really awesome, great work! :3

Your characterization of all three of the boys in your story was very accurate, and the ending was great! Marvelous work~!