Reviews for Give and Take
bookish327 chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
This was absolutely perfect! So well-written with just the right amount of characterization and description of their newly-formed step forward in their relationship while Booth was gazing at Brennan before she woke up. I could see how what would start out with an affectionate kiss on her forehead would lead to more kisses that would slowly wake her up, and then it would all just continue on from there.

Their flirtatious banter was very believable for the Booth & Brennan that we know from canon, when considering where they are now in the "sexually insatiable" stage of their relationship. I could see both of them feeling very safe in alternately taking and giving up control in the bedroom. Feeling utterly secure in their relationship (because of the foundation of a deep, close friendship), they would trust each other implicitly in bed, too. It made perfect sense to me that he would delight in making her come not once, but twice, and she would challenge him to do so as she did. Booth will always rise to a taunt like that, especially where pleasing the woman he loves is concerned, and I could completely see him having the most intense pleasure if he knows that she's feeling just as much completion herself. It was also very in-character for him to blurt out that he loves her while completely uninhibited like that. I was so happy that she admitted that she felt the same way, too. I love that about your Brennan: she doesn't tend to run from his love as much as canon Brennan. Amen. :-)

By the way, the part about him being so turned on by her Wonder Woman costume also made me laugh, because I seem to remember his gobsmacked reaction during that episode, too. Nice callback.
grc73 chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
A brilliant mixture of fluff and *ahem*, smut.

Really great to read, I hope they end up like this!
DaLiza chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
So hot and so sweet. Loved it!
Crimson-Kiss17 chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
So well done!
ObstinateHeadstrongWoman chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
aw. awesome. cute ending. good job :)
Gryphin chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Bad Gryphin, just now getting to review this! I guess that's how long it took me to get over how *hot* that was. Sheesh! You are most definitely coming into your own in the M arena. I give you mad props because I've only written one M chapter and it was so hard. (Pun intened ;-) Great job Jess!
SarahShalomDavid chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
bones and booth are so good together x
crazycamera chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Nice going!
lizook chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Sweetie, this is one of my favorites of yours. Hot yet so sweet.

"teasing him while barely contained in that damn Wonder Woman costume." LMAO, I told you this last night, but I love that. Such a Booth thought.

"“You already had me. Last night. Several times, if memory serves. And the night before that. And-”"

LMAO! So Brennan. Teasing yet clearly she enjoys it :)

"Things were entirely different with Booth though. He’d taken her no-nonsense approach to sex and turned it upside down. Not only had he shown her that taking it slow could be really passionate, but she was also discovering that the intense emotional connection they shared could be expressed physically. She wanted to make him feel the way he made her feel."

Gah, I just love that. Showing how because it's *him* it's different. That she just wants to make him feel the same...*sighs* Perfect.

Love the last line as well. So wonderfully done hun! :)
bb-4ever chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
excellent shot those two are so hot. look forward to more from you
Monisse chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Ohh this as definetly very good! I really enjoyed the nice flow the story took in developing culminating with their admition of feelings for each other. It was very well done!
ab89us chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
This is really hot, steamy and definetly sweet. Love it!

*Alyssa
MineUnfaltering chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
There's gonna be more right?

Awesome job loved it!
Aching Bones chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Hi there,

Just loved this...love the affect she has on him and how he wants her all the time...

'She could do things to his body that he never knew were possible and she seemed equally impressed by his prowess. To say they were compatible was an understatement. Booth was pretty sure they were made for each other'...

Love how Bones felt with Booth and how he was like no other man before him...

'Things were entirely different with Booth though. He’d taken her no-nonsense approach to sex and turned it upside down. Not only had he shown her that taking it slow could be really passionate, but she was also discovering that the intense emotional connection they shared could be expressed physically'...

And just love how he told her he loved her, how nervous he was of her reaction...it was just so sweet or she told him she loved him too...These two are just magic together and I can not wait for them to get it together on the show...

Thank you for this...

Ger
labrat21 chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Hot, steamy and sweet.
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