You should categorize this story under the suspense genre. I've been on the edge of my seat the whole time I've been reading this!

I really liked this. ;-). An original plot (I think) and you twisted it well. Great job! :-D even if you published this like six years ago.

I love this story :)
Great job ;)

This is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD !

please write more!

update soon please

AHHHH! WONDERFUL! I LOVE IT! _

Yes, an epilogue would be very nice indeed...

Great job on the story so far, I liked it alot, please keep going and update real, real, real, soon thanks.

I really like this story:) and the bad guy is so creepy that its cool! I could also see this actually happening to Mikey too, hehe.

What the Hell just happend?

good story. the fight scence could use some work though. i kept losing my place and i coudnt figure out what was happening at times. but in the end it all made sence so thats good. the suspence was excilent and i am suprised that mikey could even walk let alone fight after his ordeal. either way good story and cant wait to see what else you have writen

omg i loooove it! :D

omg this was so good! i loved it!

are you gonna update?

Wow I love that name, Kameko. Well I'll make this short since my head is spinning with ideas thanks to this story.

It's good, keep writing!

(giggling) Yeah, I know I read it late. I read a bit, and then couldn't find it for ages, and then I LOVED it all over again! Great ficcie!

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