Reviews for Dangerous Games
Guest chapter 5 . 4/25/2017
I know it has been ages, but this story is amazing and I would love if you were to update it. I just came across you as an author and I have fallen in love with both the stories that you have written because your writing is absolutely incredible.

An update would be great, but since it's been years I know I'm getting my hopes up and I just thought I would try anyway x
woodyt chapter 5 . 8/4/2015
Did you ever you ever finish this cos it's great & would to rea d more
PinkMusicalCherry chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
this is so great! I kinda wish he'd just given the note to Petunia though, hahaha. Ahhh please update soon!
PVersusNP chapter 5 . 5/22/2011
Why do I always find an awesome fanfic after much searching, really get into it, and THEN realise that it hasn't been updated for years? It's really depressing :(

Basically, this is awesome. I love Snape too and the Harry angst in this is great. There are hardly any spelling/grammar mistakes (a wonderful thing in the fanfic universe) and each chapter is so gripping! I was leaning stupidly close to my computer throughout because the action was drawing me in, and the humour in this got me so much that I kept randomly snorting with laughter. It's at times like this that I'm glad I have a computer in my bedroom, not in a more public place... :)

I was hoping for a reaction scene with Harry's friends, or even just to see how furious Aunt Petunia would get. Please update! Don't leave us all hanging, 'cause this is brilliant so far.
kickthemoon chapter 5 . 5/7/2010
This is really good - are you still writing it? I would love to read what happens next!
Jezza7630 chapter 5 . 9/30/2009
I just stumbled across your story, and I have to say, i's amazingly well written. You have a great talent and I do hope you continue with this.
wsnowee chapter 5 . 9/23/2009
arh~u r toturing me by stopping here...it's interesting!i luv this kind of harry n severus~update~
Kirby77DP77 chapter 5 . 9/20/2009
This is freakin' AMAZING! Definatly the best Harry and Snape end up together in Private Drive fic, EVER! :)

I hope you update as soon as you can, I'll be waiting for the next chapter anxiously!

kirby
misundersnape chapter 5 . 9/18/2009
Good story!

A few little errors here and there... eg it's a 'ladder' not 'latter' that you use to climb up a shaft... and a few other spelling errors that I cannot specifically remember just now... but overall very entertaining.

Oh, and how did Harry get his wand back? I didn't see where he went back and got it after saying he left it in the grass when Lucius attacked the second time. A simple Accio by Dumbledore would fix that omission right up... And why not give Snape Lucius' wand? Harry could keep it until Severus thinks to ask for one... just a suggestion...

Plus, what becomes of the dead DE and Lucius' ... surely not just left there? Better fill that plot hole... DD Banishing them with magic... ?

I see it's been a while since you updated... but I hope you do soon... I wanna see what happens at the Dursley's when Severus regains consciousness...

misundersnape...
BloOm chapter 4 . 8/16/2009
update please :'(
White Wyrsa chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Nice beginning! Very appealing indeed. The dialigue between snappish Snape and his wize but meddlesome Headmaster is very authentic, can't wait to see Harry's reaction.

Very promissing begining!
Rainyrose chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Wow! This story is extremely well written and I have fallen completely in love with it! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon! :)
npetrenko chapter 5 . 7/30/2009
Interesting story. Keep Writing!
Kirsti-Lee chapter 5 . 7/20/2009
Pretty good so far; the storyline is engaging and your last chapter leaves the reader wanting to know what will happen. The characters are spot on, and the build up to this point has been good. Hoping to see another chapter soon! :)
sylvaniae chapter 5 . 7/15/2009
Very good chapter and story altogether. It was hard to stop reading when I needed to, really, so I could go to bed. By the way, you often use "form" instead of "from" when you write, so you might want to go back and correct that. It's an easy mistake to make and a very easy one to fix, as well. I love the find and replace feature :)
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