Another good read - the claustrophobic atmosphere in Mac's office, Shaz's subtle intervention and our 'dynamic duo' back together at the end.

wow, you should really carry on with this!

It has a really good plot : )

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This is brilliant. You've really captured Supermac's menace, and the dark undertones of series 2. Have favourited, and I can only hope that you write more Supermac fic; he's such an interesting character.

aww i really really like this, especially how you ended it, mac is just creepy, really well done

All the best,

Bolly

xJMx

Oh, this is marvellous! We don't have much Supermac fic yet. You capture the man's quiet manace so well, there were shivers going down my spine when he threatened Alex with the gun. You also nail how he could become a sexual threat. Gene's tenderness and concern for Alex is very touchingly shown. And I love "sleeping and smoking, often at the same time"!

Please write more A2A fics!

Really well done.

Nicely written and all plausible!

Congrats! D

Oh wow...thats fantastic. Brilliant work, I can see you're going to be an excellent fic writer for Ashes :-)

And become one of my fave authors...loved it!

Gem x