An enjoyable story.

Cute

Nice

I would have liked to see some of the scenes at the end instead of a quick bullet point presentation.

Good story and a good plot. You just need to work on making your writing seem less forced.

Short but very good. I truly enjoyed reading this. I happy to see no Dumb-As-A-Door anywhere in it. I do feel a bit sorry for Percy. But it is his own fault. He was a brown noser to both former ministers and really did nothing to help stop their excesses. I would've like to have a bit more of Astoria in this but that doesn't mean you should've written two or three chapters with her! Over all, I think it was a wonderful story and thank you for both writing and posting it.

GOlden Trio? Ice Princess? Was this stuff in the books? Did I miss it?

This is an ok it has a good idea but it could have been strung together better

Sencillamente hermoso

Lovely fic. It's nice to see that Harry has chosen some other path than an Auror or a professional quidditch player or brooms maker.

Seems like i wrote my previous review a bit prematurely. Now Daphne rejects Harry's marriage proposal only because she wants him to get to know her father and her sister...wait.. WHAT? It's almost like I'm reading another story. This is still the father that caused her to fcking flee the country since he was going to sell her, right? I really love the idea of Harry and Daphne meeting in another country with no idea of what the future will hold but all these inconsistencies sadly kind of ruins it.

The personality of Daphne's father completely changed in a few chapters, first he's cold and is going to sell her so he'll be able to live comfortably again. Then after he gets his money back he suddenly becomes the caring father? I feel like it would've been nicer if you kept them poor since now the contract isn't needed anymore (for Daphne's freedom).

Sweet :)

Good, but extremely rushed ending.

Great Little Story. Thanks