#burst out laugh

THE HELL-! LOL! I KNEW IT!(?)

SETO! YOU'RE NOT A DRAGON, DAMMIT! YOU'RE INFLUENCED BY KISARA!

GAH! Poor Akai... POOR JOEY!

#grinning in amusement

Ah wait, only Tea and Mokuba who watched them?!

always lov reading this

...wow. that escalated quickly . /
great dialog though and i liked how u applied it to Joey and Seto Kaiba

this story was just so adorable. i was smileing the whole time. and puppyshipping is one of my fav shippings. i ship it often myself. and i really love how you wrote your characters. i laughed so hard when the two hollow dragons went at it during the battle. XD seto's reaction at first got me really laughing. joey's was even funnier. the whole cover his eyes bit was just pure genious. you really know your characters. and your an inspiration to others. myself included.

This was hilarious!

Oh my gosh! I laugh... SO FUCKING HARD!

I love your dragon stories! Please I do hope you will write more with them!

i enjoy your humor

I love Kisara/Akai fics that you write! Please do some more!Amazing fic!

*giggles* this was a great read.

Very funny ending, and I loved the name "akai" you gave the black dragon.

nicely done -

loooooooool! He bit him back! his obliviousness is helarious!

I really liked the end when they started humping each other. XD how i wish i could have seen joey's face!

Your work is quite enjoyable!

This turned out to be extremely amusing. xD I liked the idea a lot with the dominate Blue Eyes White Dragon and applying that to real life. I laughed so hard when you put the "COVER MY BROTHER'S EYES!" Lol. Awesome one-shot.

-Mel's Merleawe

Ugh, reviews are always so awkward to write -choo choo choo (like a choo-choo train)-

Anyways, this is one of my favorites stories, I can't even begin to count how many times I've read this because if I did, I'd never stop because for sure, I'll be reading it again.

It really was absolutely adorable and makes me smile every time I read it because there's all this fluff and then a kink of lust powdered here and there.

Because I really dislike the awkward hump of emotion I feel every time I write a review I'm just going to write it all in this one (I hope you don't mind). I really enjoy your stories and I always look forward to any new chapter you write. There's been a few I've read that I was iffy about until I read them and was glad I did.

So...thank-you (I think that's what I mean to say) for channeling your creativity in a way that brings me and others happiness and smiles.

Sincerly,

theallpowerfullme