Really liked it! I could feel the intensity of Cas!

I'll admit i read this for a bit of guilty pleasure because im on a Cas high at the moment (hehe) - It's a great little story, i just think it could use a bit more padding. Poof Cas is in love, poof they are now rolling around in the grass lol. There's not much of a build up (and it's all about the build up lol)

Keep it how you like it, but if it was me i would change the "i think you're in love" to "i think you have feelings for this girl" and have a bit more story in between Cas realising he loves her. Like him checking up on her when she's doing a different job, him saving her life in an exciting way, maybe even them falling and he lands on her (ok my minds reeling haha)

I'm going to read more fan fiction now! bye xx

P.s "When Cas said "What's that" - that was perfect, gave me chills
Keep up the good work! xx

You write really well! I absolutely loved this story, too bad it was a bit short. I would have loved to read more

That was an absolutely amazing story. I loved seeing Cas so confused with the foreign feeling of love. Wish you two could have spent more time together.. And who knows? Maybe when you die, and if he is eventually killed, maybe you'll share a heaven as soulmates...

BEST STORY EVEER. FUCKIIING AMAZING. HATS OFF TO YOU.

CAS IS TOO CUTE FOR HIS OWN GOOD

Wtf looool xD

Very awesome! Great detail! :)

That was great! Most Cas fan fiction is all about him and Dean, this was a rare gem, and you have a great way of putting the love story in a wonderful tale I really got caught up in! Wonderful just wonderful, never stop writing

omg this was the most beautiful thing i've ever written and i think i'm about to cry

loved this story but like all good ones i didn't want it to end.

This story was great. I often imagine stories like this (I'm usually just a normal, useless citizen though). You did an awesome job. Keep up the good work. :)

wow it was REALLY godd

it was different from the other 'boy love' fics and it was refreshing

very very god job!

"Yes, I put my self in a fanfiction. yes, I made one of the characters fall in love with me. Why? Psh, who wouldn't? p.s. COMMENTS PLEZZE!"

I wouldn't. But then maybe I'm just weird. I keep my private fantasies, y'know, private.

Cas would never confide in dean. ever.