Ben is like the biggest bastard in the world! HE SHOULDN'T HAVE JUST LEFT! I don't care though; Jack ends up with someone much better

-Griever Leonhart-

"The last twinkle of a dying flame is beautiful... shall he die beautifully?" Zhang He

Ummm, let's see, Jack and Ben? Sorry but isn't Jack known for being a lady's man...having affairs with his FEMALE assistants...unless Ben has had some kind of sex change that the viewers are unaware of this is completely wrong! Also, I see you put down someone's Jack & Nora story (and you were very rude I might add), that is much more believable than this.

Whoa... is it just me, or is Jack a lot more of a jerk in this story than in your Jack/Mike stories?

Awww, that's so sad. So Jack isn't really a total jerk...He just screws up...A lot.

This was a very interesting piece. Well written. I would love for you to write some more slash stories, with Jack and Mike reconciling. They seem so right together. Now that Jack has realized some of what he did wrong in their relationship, he and Mike could make a go of it. Think about it. I would love to see some happy stories with them, such as celebrating their first Christmas together, and such.

I keep liking this story and to my surprise I'm growing to like this pair more than a lot of others. This is a very nice and interesting reading, but leaves things hanging in the air...

Looks like it calls for another sequel