Reviews for If
Guest chapter 13 . 1/25/2019
Plz Update it’s AMAZING!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2019
Amazing!Plz Update!XD
professionalprimadonna chapter 1 . 3/23/2018
That story is funny and angsty at the same time and I don't even mind the cliffhanger here.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/23/2017
Feeling when you;
Find a great EdVy fic and the last update was on 2009
L chapter 13 . 1/9/2017
Never going to go a month?
It's been nearly 8 years
Guest chapter 13 . 9/29/2016
Pls Update soon ahhhhh i want them to do more than just kissing!
Lesbian69 chapter 6 . 9/24/2016
SHIP SHIP SHIPPITY SHIP
inuyashamunkey chapter 13 . 6/27/2016
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY AND Y U NO UPDATE
0Book0Worm0 chapter 13 . 12/7/2014
I hope you'll update this, I'm going through my alerts and removing everything that hasn't been updated for a while and I will be sad to delete this.
Jay chapter 13 . 6/7/2014
okay, so I started out reading this as a total EdxWinry finatic... Yah, that's completely down the tubes now. I honestly didnt know Edvy was a thing until now. I just started reading it because I'm kind of sick of the EdxOC. but this genuinely surprised me. This is one of the few amazing fanfictions that sink my OTP and replace it. congradulations. I can't wait until the next update!
smbsnowflake chapter 13 . 4/12/2014
I really liked your story, even though I was not very fond of the whole Edvy thing, but you did a really good job writing it out and adding detail. Probably the best fanfic I have read so far. I can understand the flute thing because my friend plays the flute. Envy is my favorite character so I am glad you incorporated him (it) into your story. Thanks for the read! And I hope you continue to write!
Guest chapter 13 . 3/24/2014
Oh my god this is awesome! More please!
Miki chapter 13 . 12/11/2013
I love it from both points of their views just amazing it tells you what Happens to Envy and goes up back to where you were and then you go back to Ed's thoughts just simply amazing i love it the whole thing
La Reine de Macabre chapter 13 . 6/24/2013
Hey! You! Yeah, you! Writer! You need to update!
Nana-chan97 chapter 13 . 5/17/2013
I don't usually read incomplete stories (I'm sure you can understand why, seeing as you haven't updated since 2009 T.T), but I accidentally stumbled across this while searching for Edvy doujinshi (WHICH I JUST CAN'T SEEM TO FIND!). I found a link to a doujinshi - that ended up being fake - then a link to some LiveJournal groupie thingie that's trying to bring Edvy back to life (that's failing pitifully, from what I've seen. And I'm still pitifully rooting for them here from the sidelines.), then a link to this story's summary. And I just immediately thought, I am SO reading this!

And then I got to ch 13. And then I saw that it hasn't been updated in ages. And then I cried.

Seriously, I'm BEGGING you, if you're still somewhere out there, PLEASE update! I mean, I guess I understand if you don't . . . This is fanfiction, and compared to real life, fanfiction is nothing. But I'm having tons of trouble getting some good Edvy material that isn't PWP, and this story is the first I've found - that's actually darn good and that I haven't read before - in MONTHS. Being an Edvy fan, I'm sure you must have encountered this problem at one point yourself, right?

So, now, after that utterly pathetic attempt to guilt you into updating, I'm gonna go find a good corner to sulk in 'cause I'm REALLY Edvy-deprived T.T

P.S - I'm faving this. I don't care if you update or not, I love this story. One of the best Edvy I've ever read, even better than Gegen Gott - maybe even better than Expecting the Unexpected - and those two are really, REALLY good stories.
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