Reviews for Want Take Have |
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cbrendible chapter 1 . 7/26/2010 Pretty decent... I would have imagined that it would have been much easier to read though. Some more punctuation to differentiate between speech and the body of the story would be nice. All in all though, it was a pretty decent story and fun to read. |
Dimkaagon chapter 1 . 1/31/2010 Very cute! Thanks for writing! |
DoctorFang chapter 1 . 5/24/2009 aw cute! i like. |
Alexa454 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009 Speech marks were invented for a reason. you need to use them. other wise its good |