You should do the remake, it would be amazing!

The paintball thing was brilliant

Jack is great in his role. I love the Doctor's admittance of his feelings for Rose too. Lucy was a nice touch as well

I love the Doctor in this story, his reaction to her being mute as in character as was Jack's every action lol

Wow, the Master and Jackie play their parts so well. The days thing was a great detail otherwise, no rush for Rose with the TARDIS and all.

Aw, so cute how the Doctor is talking with Jack about liking her, bit OOC but I like it

Interesting twist but looks promising

another gem! I love Nine/Rose! haha but I'd like it if you were still considering doing the mermaid version... ;)

Loved it! That was very good!

AW THAT WAS SO GOOD! SO CUTE! Loved it! Keep up the great work.

Yet again another good chapter/story. I like how you are doing it. instead of it being her father it's her mother. Instead of it being the sea witch it's the doctors half brother. I like the different changes.

That was cute :) Little Mermaid was always my favorite!

*grin* I do love happy endings.

Very interesting idea! I never would have thought to combine it with the Little Mermaid, but really it does fit. Only thing I don't get though, why'd Rose and Wilf run when the TARDIS showed up? If Rose has already met the Doctor and isn't afraid of him, why wouldn't she stay?

I really liked this story :)